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Clearly, I am not the
best texter, so this prompt suited me and quite frankly I
thought it would be the funniest. Even writing the title to this blog post, my
MacBook wanted to change "poetry" to something probably along the
lines of "possum". Communication, now, is conveyed mainly through
technology. Think about it, whens the last time you got a personal letter in
the mail of any sort of substance (the letter from that same college you get
every week doesn't count)? Now, we send emails, Facebook chats, and
texts, among other things. And with all of these, we deal with
autocorrect.
When phones first came out with the
option, my friends and I would frequently stop and laugh at all the ridiculous
things we would end up sending each other. I even call my best friend Nesty now
because that’s what my first smartphone would always change her name to. But
now, its such a commonality, that we find ourselves reading around the
autocorrected ridiculousness and somehow our brains are able to, for the most
part, still understand what is trying to be said without dwelling on the
corrections. The idea that we can understand “gob” as “go” or “duck” as pretty
much any word my phone feels should
be duck, is quite telling. Although I don’t think this means we will necessarily
begin to adopt these silly changes into our language, I do believe it changes
the playing field for how we are able to communicate.
Going back to the idea of the
letter, autocorrect has allowed us to significantly decrease the formality of
our language. Because we are able to understand words that very loosely
resemble the other words they were intended to be, we lose the sense of
responsibility for going back and editing what we are trying to convey and our
desire for conciseness. With letters, the ritual was you sat down and wrote in
the most understandable language as neatly and correctly as possible. Now, we
don’t think twice when we get a text from a family member saying “meat you at
DEA mall tonight!” The meaning still gets across, but our ability to understand
has become heightened.
So what does this all mean? Well, I
don’t think we can entirely throw all our rules about language away, because
after all, without a basis and a “standard” to go off of, would we really be
able to understand autocorrects madness? Without standards to language, nothing
would be able to be understood. There would be no right or wrong to guide us to
understanding each other. However, putting all of this into perspective, language
does reveal itself to be adaptable once the standards are solidified and widely
understood and recognized. Once a standard is established, something that
everyone can make have basis of understand off of, then there are no limits to
how it is manipulated and utilized. And autocorrect is no exception.
Hahaha, this great. There were some parts where I desperately wanted to correct the grammar and that was the charm of the entire paragraph. I really liked your analysis and the point where we don't get any type of substance anymore. I like that you also took a more realistic turn at the end by mentioning that we can't get rid of all the rules in language and mentioning our lack of attention towards correcting words after going through the autocorrect process. You really got to the depths of the philosophy and true usage of autocorrect. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Olivia. Your texting was quite humorous and your analysis was very thoughtful. I really liked how you brought in personal connections to how autocorrect has been absorbed into your life- when talking about "gob" and "duck" and "Nesty." It was humorous and very relatable, but then you took it even further by mentioning how we cannot ignore the rules of English- autocorrect is only a manipulation of the language, which was interesting. So, very good job.
ReplyDeleteHey my Olive, While I was reading the very first paragraph I was so confused because I didn't quite understand much of what you were saying lol. I know most people can read around auto-correct but my brain just completely stops when I see it. This was very good though, the point intended with you using the auto-correct was clearly displayed. I also love how you counter-argued yourself in your reflection. You made your points but you also saw the flip side to what you were saying and I think that is a very good writting strategy. Overall, good job!
ReplyDeleteEllo Olivia! So I have almost no idea what that first paragraph said but your reflection was so good it doesn't really matter! I loved how you explained exactly how auto correcting has changed your conversations while at the same time stressing how almost everyone using it. Furthermore, I enjoyed how your story played into your thesis talking about how your friend has come to understand your auto corrects and then talking about how once a "standard" created we can understand things. You give us a live example and deliver it in a boring standard way. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteOMG I am so sorry guys... I guess when I posted this it changed my poem into a giant jumbled paragraph- I promise it was in stanzas! I don't know whether I should change it or not, though...
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