Thursday, October 31, 2013

Social Change Proposal: First Draft


Olivia Melendez
Period 4 APL+C
Social Change Proposal Final Rough Draft

Throughout my career as an inner-city magnet school student, I took for granted the tools that were always at my disposal which guided me in the right direction, the most influential of this being the teachers and administrators who were always there for me, who I confided in, who I respected, and who respected me. Once my friends, also in the magnet program, graduated and went off into our local high schools, many kids who had once been the best and the brightest began to lose their spark. Many got involved with drugs, and many were bounced from school to school as if “How to Get Expelled” were a new elective. Kids who once took pride in being handed their Honor Roll certificate every trimester now looked forward to passing by the skin of their teeth to the next class. There is something disgustingly wrong with this, and it made me think: What is the flaw in the system?

Well, as it turns out, teenagers are highly impressionable. Eighth graders cling to the latest trend like their lives depend on it, and everything you say to them carries weight. From my experiences, I’d say twelve to fourteen years old is when what is said carries the most weight.  

It also turns out that there were 15 murders per 100,000 people in 2012 after a rash of gun violence in Bridgeport, and at least 15 sets of gangs operate in Bridgeport[1]. In fact, Bridgeport has been initiated into the 25 Most Dangerous Cities in America[2] club, an extra curricular I don’t feel is making too positive an impression on our already impressionable youth.
So, what do we do about this? Well, as of now we have great programs and organizations within Bridgeport, like the YMCA and the Cardinal Shehan Center, which do a solid job of giving their participants a constructive environment in which they can participate. But with staggering murder rates and an unfortunate 66.3 percent of the 2012 graduating class of Bridgeport actually graduating, we need a more aggressive program that gets kids right when it matters, that is, the transition from middle to high school. This is a time in which kids really find their personality and friend groups, which can either put them on the right track, or unfortunately, like many others, the wrong.

My idea is to establish a program within these organizations that will act as a sort of mentor system for the kids of the mentioned ages. These teenagers will be partnered up with volunteers who are upper high school age, college age, adults- anyone who can offer positive guidance and support, and also be willing to extend some possible personal experience in the trials and tribulations of growing up faced with adversity- and exchange contact information, arrange meetings, or whatever system feels most comfortable for the mentee, in which they will build a positive relationship where they feel comfortable seeking advice and guidance in navigating the decisions a teen is faced with in developing themselves in one of America’s most dangerous cities.

Such a program would be extremely beneficial for those kids who don’t have access to positive adult figures in their personal lives, or even teachers like I did. They can now have someone who they feel comfortable considering their confidant, and by encouraging successful high school upperclassmen and college age young adults to volunteer as the mentors, teens will be more responsive, as they feel more of a connection to someone who has recently been through what they are facing and who they can more closely relate to. This will result in kids wanting to willingly participate in the program, rather than being forced.

By adopting such a system, our local organizations aimed at bettering the lives of our youth would see a plethora of success stories. I know personally that if some of my close friends had had such an opportunity available to them going into high school, then they wouldn’t have the questionable future they now have almost graduating. Kids can build relationships which will help them to stay on the right track, and having someone to seek help from when navigating through the confusing transition to becoming a young adult can make or break an individuals situation, as I’ve come to find out is essential through my own personal experience with the transition.

So rather than uniting as a community to accept our new titles as among the “Most Dangerous Cities” or other less than flattering names, lets come together to give our youth the tools they need to contribute to turning that name into “Most Safe City”, or “City With the Most Opportunity”. I propose our local youth organizations adapt this idea of a mentoring system and see the need for it. Because really, I would much rather the next generation of our community to be known for 15 out of every 100,000 going out into the greater world as positive representations of Bridgeport, contributing new ideas that began to fester when they sought out someone to guide them while they were young, rather than the current 15 per every 100,000 people being murdered because they lacked the guidance to sustain a positive output.




To be sent to the local newspapers for (hopefully) publishing

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